Saturday, September 8, 2007

Captain Tory

This story was inspired by the book The Mysteries of Harris Burdick by Chris Van Allsburg.

He swung his lantern three times and slowly a schooner appeared. At first I thought I was seeing things, but then I realized I wasn’t!

When we got on the schooner he said, “This is your home for now.”

I asked where my room was and he said it was the last room on the right. He also handed me the key to my room.

When I opened the door I was amazed! I had a Gamecube and a Playstation 2 plus a tv.

My bed was a bunk bed. I wanted to sleep on the top because on the bottom was a cat and a dog. I had pets too!

This could not get any better!

by Dylan

4 comments:

Colby said...

The part about the cat and dog was a little strange.

Ben said...

Were the cat and the dog water compatible because i'm thinking that the boat was under water so wouldn't the game things be completely damaged and why would he know the kid was going to get on?

Colby said...

Why not have a, LIZARD,and a,COBRA for a pet?

Anonymous said...

lol in my class the assignment had to be like a 1000 words. and how can a cat and a dog possibly stay together. Moreover, u wouldn't have electricity. so no TV, PS, Gamecube etc.lol a perfect C- story